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Thank You.

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 Hello every one, I know I did not uploaded all the compositions, but I really appreciate your support.  This year has been difficult to me, a lot of changes, but I was giving my best.  In English Composition I learned a lot. How to create outline, narrowing the topic. Editing, and all the techniques to get  good results in my writings. Some techniques are easier that others. My Professor super good was explaining and giving feedbacks and our practice fornus to get better understanding and to do a better job in composition.  I learned about persuasive writing, compare and contrast, causes and effect essays, it it going to be useful in future for me.  Also I have been practicing by my own doing my own compositions. I have been using the techniques I learned in this class is are really useful. It helps you a lot. In the revising and proofreading strategies you can change words and also the grammar.  In the last classes I could not upload my practices, du...

Causes and effects

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 Hello, hope everything is going fine. This time I am going to share more about composition. I the last class we learned that when we are writing about something, we can focus in the causes or in the effects.  In this type of composition we are going to use a thesis statement. This is going to help our composition giving it more strength in the introduction. We need to take care on the words we are going to select for it.  In the first practice of the third register we are only are going to create the mapping with our ideas and the outline. There is no going to be a final composition. My topic for focusing on causes is:    Common reasons people get divorced around the world.   For this practice we can still using a Venn Diagram or a mapping. I used a mapping. Introduction: Thesis statement : There are a lot of couples getting married around the world but also there are couples getting divorced for different reasons.   P1. Betrayal. Peo...

Midterm 2.

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💌Composition is were you learn to write thinks you are feeling and thinks you thought. 🦋 I have been doing my best, some time you have everything and you can lose that in a second. But never give up on your dreams.  Hope you are doing good. This is Adela again. This time I am going to share my midterm composition.  My topic is:    F ast food saves times but home cooked meal a life. I used the Venn diagram.   Outline : subject by subject.   Introduction :        Purpose : the better option .   Paragraph 1:       Marketing, calories, delicious, do not cook.   Transition : similarities.   Paragraph 2: vegetable  new oil  you need for that food.   Conclusion : both are delicious, balance between both   Outline : subject by subject.   Introduction :        Purpose : the better option .   Paragraph 1:     ...

Evaluation 2 R2

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🌱Never give up! If you have a dream work for it.💪 Hello everybody, this is Adela again. Hope you are very well.  Today I am going to share with you my evaluation 2 of the second  register. Its has been difficult but here I am.  In this evaluation I can use a Venn diagram or a shart to see and compare my ideas. I am going to use a Venn Diagram. Also I need to create an outline. And this is going to be a point by point essay.  My topic is:  Learning English by our own or learning English in an specific place.   Outline: point by point Essay Introduction :     • purpose: learning  process Paragraph 1: schedule and platforms.   By ourselves: no specific schedule, no specific place.   By an specific place: schedule, specific place to study. Paragraph 2: practice and feedback   By ourselves: nobody brings feedback s to you, no friends no practice.   By  an specific place: get feedbacks, no frien...

Evaluation 1 R2

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 🦋Hello everyone, hope you are super good, we have been learning a lot about outlines and composition.  This time I am sharing with you my evaluation 1 of the register 2. 🦋 We need to use a Ven diagram and also to do an outline with the information we are going to add to the composition and it was a subject by subject essay.  🖊My topic is:  What to do with the first salary spending it or saving it? Outline : Subject-by-subject essay.  Introduction:   Purpose: to now what to do with the first salary. Paragraph 1: spend  Can eat, med clothes, short trips, medicine, vitamins. Paragraph 2: save   Achieve your goals, eat the necessary food, long future trips.  Conclusions: spend the necessary money only and save for future plans.  Final composition:  What to do with the first salary spending it or saving it? Our first job is important, we start getting our own money and some people do this question to themselves “what should...

Venn Diagram and Chart.

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  Hello readers! 🌹 I really hope you are doing good! Today I will post something new is really useful for us when writing an essay. This class we continued learning about compare-and-contrats essays, this time how to organize them: 1. According to individual points, discussing each subject in relation to each point. 2. According to the subject themselves, discussing one then the other. Someting important is that the structure depends on the nature of topic, the purpose and the audience you are writing to.  So, we learned how analyze the relationship between two elements/ subjects using the prewriting techniques Venn Diagram and Chart. Using a Venn Diagram or Chart can help you quickly and efficiently compare and contrast two or more elements/subjects/ideas.  This time the practice #2 share and idea we have about a topic comparing and contracts two things using the Venn Diagram or the Chart. My Venn Diagram: My final writing.   Coffee vs. Coca cola Coffee ...

Contrast & Comparative Writing.

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Welcome back dear classmates, hope you are super good. Today we are going to continue learning more about composition. In the class #6 we learned about compare and contrast essays. In this type of writing you need to have two elements. 💠 Comparison in writing discusses elements that are similar, so, you write the things both elements have in common. 💠 Contrast in writing discusses elements that are different, so, you describe the differences between two elements. This time our weekly task consists in the writing of a compare or contrast essay; we need to select two elements.  My task:  Living in the city and living in the countryside. Living in the city and living in the countryside have it differences but also each of them have their advantages. I born-and-raised in the countryside, it is amazing. Also I have temporary lived in the city I can say I have experienced a lot from both worlds. Look for a place to live sometimes it is difficult for people that want to be comfor...