Evaluation 2 R2

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Hello everybody, this is Adela again. Hope you are very well. 
Today I am going to share with you my evaluation 2 of the second  register. Its has been difficult but here I am. 

In this evaluation I can use a Venn diagram or a shart to see and compare my ideas. I am going to use a Venn Diagram. Also I need to create an outline. And this is going to be a point by point essay. 

My topic is: 

Learning English by our own or learning English in an specific place.


 Outline: point by point Essay

Introduction:

    • purpose: learning  process

Paragraph 1: schedule and platforms.

  By ourselves: no specific schedule, no specific place.

  By an specific place: schedule, specific place to study.

Paragraph 2: practice and feedback

  By ourselves: nobody brings feedback s to you, no friends no practice.

  By  an specific place: get feedbacks, no friends or friend to practice.

Paragraph 3: results.

  By ourselves: depending on the effort, practice.

  By an specific place: depending on the effort, practice.

Conclusion: both have results, need effort and consistency.


My final composition: 

 Outline: point by point Essay

Introduction:

    • purpose: learning  process

Paragraph 1: schedule and platforms.

  By ourselves: no specific schedule, no specific place.

  By an specific place: schedule, specific place to study.

Paragraph 2: practice and feedback

  By ourselves: nobody brings feedback s to you, no friends no practice.

  By  an specific place: get feedbacks, no friends or friend to practice.

Paragraph 3: results.

  By ourselves: depending on the effort, practice.

  By an specific place: depending on the effort, practice.

Conclusion: both have results, need effort and consistency.


My final composition: 

 Learning English by our own or learning English in an specific place.

Learning a new language is a great experience someone can have but process the person choose to follow is important. People have a lot of options (talking about places) were they can go and learn language but there are some people that choose to study by they own using different platforms.

There are some differences between learning English by ourselves and learning in an specific place. By ourselves we  do not have an specific time to take a class, we do it at the time we think is better for us during the day. On the other hand we have people that choose to learn English an specific place were they have an specific time able go to learn and prepare for the future, but will depend on the person if they want only to be learning in the place they are paying for the services or if they proactive and learn more using platform that are available for everyone to learn English.

When you are learning a new language by yourself  you do not have someone that evaluate the advances you are having in learning process, if you do not have some friends or relatives that speak the language that can help to practice with you could be difficult to have interactions in future, not because you do not have the vocabulary but you have no practice the speaking ever. Nonetheless if you study in an academy or other place you have someone assisting you all time you are there, and this person will help you to improve in areas you need giving feedbacks to you, also you can practice with classmates and they will give you feedback if needed.

So, every person learning English should practice a lot to achieve the goal. It does not matter if you are learning by yourself or going a place and paying the service, you need to practice  and give your best to get good results when taking with others, if you do not practice enough you will no see the results that want. Everything depends on your persistency.

Both learning English by our own and learning in a specific place are really needed of a lot effort, consistency also requires of motivation and time, and the key is to listen, practice and read. If you really want to learn English never give up until you achieve your goal but remember grammar is necessary to express your thoughts at the moment of speaking.


Thanks for your support  I really appreciate it. 

Till nex time.

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