Evaluation 1 R2

 🦋Hello everyone, hope you are super good, we have been learning a lot about outlines and composition. 

This time I am sharing with you my evaluation 1 of the register 2. 🦋

We need to use a Ven diagram and also to do an outline with the information we are going to add to the composition and it was a subject by subject essay. 

🖊My topic is: 

What to do with the first salary spending it or saving it?

Outline: Subject-by-subject essay. 

Introduction: 

 Purpose: to now what to do with the first salary.

Paragraph 1: spend

 Can eat, med clothes, short trips, medicine, vitamins.

Paragraph 2: save 

 Achieve your goals, eat the necessary food, long future trips. 

Conclusions: spend the necessary money only and save for future plans. 

Final composition: 

What to do with the first salary spending it or saving it?

Our first job is important, we start getting our own money and some people do this question to themselves “what should I do with my first salary spend it or save it? And other 

do not, they just spend it and when they realize money is gone, wallet is empty, however, we can educate ourselves since the very beginning, if we know what to do with our salary it would be good. 

Spending our first salary is not a complete good idea, eating food in the expensive restaurants, buying new and expensive clothes we really do not need, doing short trips on every single weekend and going to parties, it will let us with empties wallet, if we are working because we need it or because of our dreams but we are spending more than we earn, are we doing good? No, right. 

I am not telling you that cannot eat in an expensive restaurant, buy clothes and so son, of course you can do it but with moderation and taking into consideration also your future, if somebody is depending on this salary maybe some of your relatives, your studies.

Buying vitamins or medicines are a good investment, so, remember money is necessary that is the reason we decided to work, we can use it to survive during the rest of the month, to pay bills and studies. 

But there is a good option we can use instead of spending our first salary, we can save it, it will help us to achieve our goals, we can only eat the necessary food, also you know, saving money can be really helpful with future problems and needs. Besides if you save part of your first salary or a high percentage of it you can use it in future to travel to other continents or you can start your own business. 

Spend the necessary only, when receive your first salary, create a list of your needs and save the rest of the money, it will be helpful for future issues or for any other thing. The more you are saving the more you are save.

Thank you for reading me. 

Till next time.

Blessings.

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