Venn Diagram and Chart.

 Hello readers! 馃尮

I really hope you are doing good!

Today I will post something new is really useful for us when writing an essay.

This class we continued learning about compare-and-contrats essays, this time how to organize them:

1. According to individual points, discussing each subject in relation to each point.

2. According to the subject themselves, discussing one then the other.

Someting important is that the structure depends on the nature of topic, the purpose and the audience you are writing to. 

So, we learned how analyze the relationship between two elements/ subjects using the prewriting techniques Venn Diagram and Chart.

Using a Venn Diagram or Chart can help you quickly and efficiently compare and contrast two or more elements/subjects/ideas. 


This time the practice #2 share and idea we have about a topic comparing and contracts two things using the Venn Diagram or the Chart.

My Venn Diagram:


My final writing.  

Coffee vs. Coca cola


Coffee and Coca cola are beverages people drink everyd6 in many countries around the world.  Both beverages are delicious, some people drink each beverages in specific times during the day and other drink coffee or Coca cola at whatever time in the day it will depend on the culture although experts recommend to drink natural drinks.

Coffee has more benefits for health than Coca cola, some of them I can mention here are that coffee reduce the risk of cardiovascular diseases, and also liver diseases; other benefits coffee has are that it reduce the risk to get Parkinson and Alzheimer, however, drinking a lot of coffee can create a dependence of caffeine and could create in the person sleep deprivation, and remember that sleeping is necessary for our body.

On the other hand, we have Coca cola many people drink it as water, or more than water as other do with coffee. Coca cola also has caffeine it has between 25 and 50 milligrams of caffeine, most of the time people prefer Coca cola than coffee because it helps them to be awake during the day when they feel tired more than coffee does, but it is due to the Coca cola has caffeine plus a lot of sugar that cause that cause that effect in people. Coca cola is delicious but dangerous for people, someone is diabetic cannot drink this beverage it could cause bad effect in health, and contrary to coffee, Coca cola has bad consequences for example it can cause cardiovascular diseases and problems in the waist.

Both are consumed for a lot of people, but as we have learn in this writing coffee is better than Coca cola, what do you think now you know this information? Will you continue drinking Coca cola, coffee  or will you choose natural beverages?


Thank you for reading me.馃尮


Till next time.馃グ

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